melancholy breaks
while blood splatters the treetops
crystals blot the sky
A contest entry
- Fall into Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended October 29, 2008, 41 entries
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Comments
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Quite Fine
well this is a mighty fine Fall write indeed. I mean this is just a very deeply well penned poem and I like thwe whole concept of where you were going with this poem. any ways its amazing how so few words packed into a poem like this form really makes a huge impact. anyw ays nice work and keep it up
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melancholy breaks
while blood splatters the treetops
crystals blot the sky
A very good haiku about fall-and you do feel the melancholy when summer is finally finished. Thank you for your haiku!
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winter born prematurely
an infant orphans the world
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now its a tanka? lol
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