Morbid relations; failing to revive what it was I believed in to begin with.
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A contest entry
- One line by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended October 25, 2008, 43 entries
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Very dark, but very true line. Once that faith is cracked it is hard to get it back. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Nice write with this. Definitely felt this one. Amazing what you can say with one line. Best of luck in the contest with this piece.
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Thank you so much
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