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Mirrored in the Face

Fragile parchment face wrinkling into winces of  horrific pain brought on by heart attack's blow

A contest entry

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 25, 2008

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    Stunning visual, hope it's not from personal experience. Great line, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

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    whisper

  • Abnormal
    October 18, 2008

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    So short but so poetic, so thought provoking. I love the way you've described the face "Fragile parchment face." Fabulous.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    I do think that you did a great job with this one liner poem thanks for sharing good luck to you in the contest be well

  • Topnotchsy
    October 16, 2008

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    Nice write with this. Amazing what you can say with one line. Best of luck in the contest with this piece.


  • libithina
    October 15, 2008
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    Ooh this speaks to me s

  • goalsv
    October 13, 2008
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    Ouch! Nice write!

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