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The Rose




my mind,
running on exaggerations,
promises made under moonlight
are now cashed in under the sun...

exhaled relief
as your sour promises leak
from the pores of a dead love,
oh, how the stench is sweet

decaying promises
besmirch the love lying
within your blackened rose...


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Prompt Is: Empty Spaces

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    Very sad yet beautifully written..I have felt your words at one point in my life. Not a good feeling
    I hope you are ok. Best of luck my friend.