Swimming in the Sahara's arid doom, the Sand Man fell in love with my pain, then carved his heart in a stone for me to lay my head on.
Author notes
Prompt: Once sentence Poem
A contest entry
- One line by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended October 25, 2008, 43 entries
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interesting...
you should add more to this piece, i would love to see what u come up with! -
Beautiful, long line but very great. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Oh my word this is a rather dark one liner but non the less it is amazing good luck to you in the contest be well
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oi, this was a bit dark, though still displayed very well. a spooky read for sure with the heart of stone. and the mention of Sand men always gave me the shivers. a nice write.
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My goodness! What's with all these dark poems?
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