Mystery
Relief
Adventure
Pain?
A contest entry
- Short and Sweet by Kitch.
700 points, ended October 24, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Four Words... by Lj-.
300 points, ended October 26, 2008, 76 entries
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sad
in a way this seems sad, but understandible. Good luck in the contest,The Shaker -
You've summed it up excellently! It is all that and more! Great write and good luck!
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woah!!
how did you get so much meaning into only four words??
This is astounding and really does define death. I really like how it ends with the question because we don't know what to expect from death.
Overall a really good write. Good Luck!!
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Totally agree with those who read this poem before. It's great the way you've defined "Death"
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You misspelled relief ;p But deep in its message, this poem. Loved it. Awesome write!
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Good words. Change "releif to read relief." Happy trails
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