keep staring right into the blank black orbs. into the deepness of my soul. look at the darkness and let it seep into you. let it take over your soul. feel what i feel. see the blurred vision coming from all the tears. youll cry til theres nothing left. cry til youre wrung dry. scream til you have no voice. then feel the abandonment which is what hurts the most. to be left alone when you need someone the most.
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Written January 26th, 2004
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Very good writing
I have a broken child , she calls herself the invisable one. She has some disabilities but they are not her . She is on stage this year at the DANBURY NUTCRACKER ,you are more than one thing. -
nice write!
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