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Reminisce

Tomorrow was
    yesterdays dawn

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4 words.

A contest entry

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  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008

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    Really

    Yesterday is gone before dawn comes around, but maybe I'm looking at it wrong! Good luck in the contest,The Shaker

  • Topnotchsy
    October 16, 2008

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    Like this a lot. Came from your one-line poem to this one and you clearly have a way of working magic with just a few words. Nice write.