i am ruby orvidae
too old now to brrod feeling rotten and rude
thank ALL for feathers or rubied be nude
reckless relentless irreverent interlude
raging raven winging onward ever onward
thick dusky sky my lone solace to an empty nest
my monogamy gone from me by a bipeds stick of sharp thunder
i will comsume his eyes for his heartless blunder
crimson shall be his mortal remains
onward ever onward my chortles insane
no sorry will right this wrong, my Eternal is gone
pierced dead dead dead dead dead
i am ruby orvidae
i revenge my beloved, his deathshand will die
onward ever onward my wide wings so leaden
soon sleep, conquering of flight, a means to deaden
fierce dread dread dread dread dread
for my forward life of unhappiness my empty nest
i spy a Watcher, it will aid me my search
its hat askew, arms akinbo, i decend, perch
deep sleep...
deep
deep
deep
!!BOOM!!
leap from deep sleep...
!!BOOM!! !!BOOM!! !!KA-BOOM!!
skies bellowing, i sidestep closer closer still
up under the Watchers tattered bill
leaning hard against his straw stuffed head
wicked winds shivering me thru and thru
torrential downpours too
i must linger
when will come come come lightnings finger?
out of NOTHING will come a clue...
a ravens rant will become a chant
i will i will i will no cant
i study Watcher, its eyes are all wrong
brown button blue button
how drastic some spastic to use plastic
time being elastic
it took no time to clip button threads
now to make it nondead
old elementals help me to find proper eyes for its head
a crumbled lackluster barn
no cow plow wheel bucket rake
please, NOTHING? it is some foul mistake?
i fowl, my beloved will never forsake
the huntsman stole, he took on cains role
my heart is unwhole, my love in a hole
will NOTHING assist me this goal?
i insist! wait! a brazier with old burnt chunks of coal
my fevered query; the coals reheat
i fly in a flurry in no way discreet
...fitting perfectly where buttons threads tore before
lightning shrieking flame singeing
frightning wreaking blame unhingeing
"!!I RUBY ORVIDAE I ORDER UN DIE INCANDESCENCE
ORVID ORVUS EYE OMNIPOTENCE
MORBID MORASS UN MUMMIFY MALEVOLENCE
IGNORED IRIS I REORDER DIE IRISDESCENCE
TORRID TITUS TORMENTIFY TRANSGRESCENCE!!"
lightning shrieking flames singeing
frightning wreaking blame unhingeing
no shame tingeing
!!BOOM BOOM BOOM!!
skies leaking leaning leading lending inleagueing lee
levi of the orvidae lurches, ruby unperches
tumbling into the sodden field, storms yield
bundled fabric and straw, no longer god of corn and caw
shifting twitching quavery in a way most unsavory
rising now to a looming height
black coal eyes hold no light
with an ancient ingight
reaching downward fangwise for the one of flight
"YOU BROUGHT ME FORTH, WHY?" questioned un levi
"daethshand espied heartburn thieving him of me thru man
i fly to avenge revenge my troth, my promise, my own
i am alone alone alone
now, you might help me if you choose?"
"I WOULD CHOOSE THIS WHY?" its shrewd lupine eyes
staring deep into ruby, seeking out lies
her tangled thoughts from whence it be wrought
unsought, yet now no less caught
ruby could never deceive the former Watcher
"because i am just one crow
i need help, i am scared and alone, so full of bitterness
loss, full of emptiness, empty nest
i thought to fly into a rock wall
without my monagamous orvus, my all
but i would devour some piece of the huntsmans bane
cain...pleace help me former Watcher of grains!"
"YESSS!" it growled low, nudging her with its poky muzzle
gently, "I CHOOSE YOUR WHY, I AM BLACKCLOUD!
COME, RUBY, RIDE MY GREAT SHOULDERS FOR A TIME
WE SHALL SEARCH OUT THIS HUMANOID CRIME
I AM WOLF SUBLIME
I WILL BE UNBORN EACH MORN TO SCARECROWS STANDBY
AT TWILIGHT, RETURNS MY COMMAND, I"
15 May 2008
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i am thunder being, i hear , isee, i am gone like a clap of thunder, you are aclever lady and a fine writter pleasure to walk you path for a time. cheers


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This is another very nice write from a very talented author, it has a rhythm that seems to chugg like anold creepy steam train, and had a very creepy feel about it, LOVE LOVE LOVE the latin bits(are they latin) gives the whole thing very strong dimension, loads of imagry seriously good take care littlrfishone


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HELLO
some of it is latin and some of it is words i made up sort of, lke trannsgrescence, as i don't think that is a form of transgressuin at all actually, lol, thanks, Theresa, for all of your comments, and for being a friend! (=-))
PEACE
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