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Morning

light
penetrates darkness,
awake

A contest entry

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  • Silver Shadow
    January 3
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    This is cool =]


  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008
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    Goodmorning

    This is a great time of day.Good luck in the contest,The Shaker


  • Jason Smith
    October 15, 2008

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    Facinating

    Who knew it was acturally possible to go so deep into something with only four words... That takes talent, and a heck of a lot of it.


  • LovingAngelForever
    October 13, 2008
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    wow, surprisingly deep for only four words.. beautiful


  • MD Masroor
    October 13, 2008

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    Whoa. I actually love this one, considering the fact that it's so deep. Beautifully penned. Keep it up!

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