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My existence

Birth
Happyness
Sadness
Death

A contest entry

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  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008
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    Good idea!

    I have read a few that were like this. Good luck in the contest,The Shaker


  • Harlequin Dance
    October 19, 2008
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    Just one spelling error: it's "happiness"


  • Autumn Rain13
    October 17, 2008
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    lovely these four words are so powerful, good luck in the contest!

  • Topnotchsy
    October 13, 2008

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    Your poem definitely got me thinking though I do believe that there is a purpose to life that makes life far more than those four words. One small spelling error, it's "happiness."


  • hks
    October 13, 2008
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    thinking about your existence. freaking amazing, but youll realize that.. that's a bit of an oversimplification: nothing happens for no reason. why would be created for the sake of sadness.?

    but contemplation [or thinking] is a sweet thing.
    this poem has me inspired.

    much love,
    oldschool

  • She Stole My Voice
    October 12, 2008
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    You should have more happy words in there :]

    Good luck ♥


    -Rainbow.

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