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Dreams...


     die

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Two Word Poem

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  • doglover
    November 23, 2008
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    makes you think

    this is kind of like a story you have to finish... interesting


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 26, 2008

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    Oh...

    This is dark! Good write. Gripping!
    Too often true. I'm going to bed now!


  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008
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    yes they can

    Its like a relationship...if you don't work on it daily it will go away! The Shaker


  • Leonura
    October 16, 2008
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    Dreams die the hardest death of all. a sad but truthful write.


  • Susan John Francis
    October 15, 2008
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    WOW!!! Dirty but correct... Lovely pain.


  • still.she.waits
    October 13, 2008
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    one word

    ouch.

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