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Somewhere In His Mind

Midnight's catacombs,
Accomodates

Nakedness 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: 4 Word Poem

A contest entry

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  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008
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    really nice

    I like this a lot! Good luck in the contest,The Shaker


  • Leonura
    October 16, 2008
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    amazing write. I like the acrostic part of the piece. emotion very vivid.


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 13, 2008
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    This is outstanding there my friend. and your acrostic is perfect.

    Riftkin


  • MD Masroor
    October 13, 2008
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    Holy crap! Awesome! Beatufiul! Deep!


  • sheltered
    October 12, 2008
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    So what... he's dead in bed?

  • She Stole My Voice
    October 12, 2008
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    Ooh la la!
    I love this one!
    Good luck in the contest ♥


    -Rainbow.

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