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Aspects

turning circles

A contest entry

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    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008
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    kind of

    gets you back to where you started quickly. Good luck in the contest and in life itself,The Shaker


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 12, 2008

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    Very cool, don't know what revision you could do, but this is great. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

  • Topnotchsy
    October 12, 2008
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    Definitely an interesting contest. Like what you did here. Best of luck in the contest.