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Branchy Sky

Arching trees,
laid barren of the mistress,
whose guardian of the fall;

 

her burden heavy
lies in her branches
from the sigh of northern

 

wind whispering to

 

the leaf curl.

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  • Nymphetemine
    January 30, 2009

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    I thought this poem was wonderfully written. It has such a natural flair to the words. It sums up the fall and the barreness of the coming winter.
    Brilliant poet
    ValkyrieNightWeaver.

    • saddie23
      January 30, 2009
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      thank you

      Thank you for the response on my poem and the wonderful comment given. Saddie23


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Very nicely done. I like the phrase "leaf curl". Great imagery there! Thanks so much for entering my contest. Be proud of your work! It’s an honor to have it shown here!


  • cbsbecm88
    October 13, 2008
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    i like how this poem is descriptive and mysterious. i could picture the scence you were describing.

    • saddie23
      October 13, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given. I'm glad you liked my poem. Saddie23

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