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Near death

I no longer dream

A contest entry

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  • WritingWretch silver member
    November 28, 2008
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    thought provoking,

    perhaps, you've become the dream.


  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008
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    Sorry!

    I hope I can always dream! Good luck in the contest. The Shaker

  • Trew
    October 15, 2008
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    wow

    This one gave me chills


  • Deathless Kris
    October 13, 2008
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    this is very nice


  • MD Masroor
    October 13, 2008
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    Deep, and beautiful. Serene in some ways, but sad. Lovely!


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    technically, contractions are two words


  • everyone1 gold member
    October 12, 2008
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    Simple and to the point



    Good job ...

    ~ James ~

  • She Stole My Voice
    October 12, 2008

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    I can't dream anymore either
    and I think it's okay.
    Good luck ♥


    -Rainbow.

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