Feather gunshots
A contest entry
- Two Words... by Lj-.
600 points, ended October 26, 2008, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Masterful!
This is great! What a picture you bring to mind with this! Bravo! Sure outclassed my entry! All the best.
I needed a bedtime laugh.


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interesting
Soft violence sort of! I like your words. Good luck in the contest and in life itself,The Shaker -
Wonderful visual, those are the ones I hope to get hit with. Good luck.
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