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a french poet knew better

chill sets in at dusk
even the palms look weathered
old wind kicks tin can

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  • azure85 gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    chill sets in at dusk
    even the palms look weathered
    old wind kicks tin can

    A great haiku about autumn, you can feel the cold air and the image of the palm in L2 is good. Thank you so much!


  • DogFish silver member
    October 13, 2008
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