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Home Comming

I approach the door
Weary from my day
Eager to enter my home
Soon buoyed up
In the glow of your smile
The warmth of your arms
My hand strokes your back
As we embrace.

We briefly part
So I loose my coat
Snowflakes melt
Dripping down
To the floor
We clasp hands
And enter the room.

Warmed from the furnace
The warmth of your embrace
Welcomes me home
Kissed we greet one another
Our fire warms us
As we recline entwined
Our lips explore


Poem By: DocBill
Written: Feb 23, 2008

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  • sense surreal
    October 16, 2008

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    beautiful

    Oh my...This is beautifully written...you've captured the emotions of a lovers reunion...and intense longing for each other's intimacy...


    • docbill gold member
      October 16, 2008
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      Thank you! Even commng home everyday can be looked forward to.