Once we were together
but that is no more
I thought it was forever
now I'm broken, tired and sore
and you're gone
but maybe not so gone
there are angel whispers in my ears
and your wings always carry me through
Angel fingers catch my tears
you're here, but you know I still miss you
sometimes in the dead of night
when I can't go on, I fear
you take away sadness and fright
with those angel whispers in my ear
and in the day, when I'm at a loss
or so dragged down, my dear
I know I can just listen close
for angel whispers in my ear
Author notes
i'm ladyhelenaofsorrows
A contest entry
- All poets welcomed! by Guerrero.
900 points, ended November 24, 2008, 51 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Thanks for entering and good luck!
Abi
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there are some people that are like that ... they have the ability to comfort and console us when times are tough. Thank you for entering
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I really enjoyed this. It was wonderfully put together, and it shows true emotions. A very unique way of expressing yourself. Well done, and thank you for entering my contest.
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this is really sad but almost hopeful at the same time. being able to hold on to someone after you lose them, what a nice thought. i really enjoyed reading this. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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nice, the rhyming is a little much at times but i really like the message and can really relate GREAT WRITE
good luck in the contest
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i know it sounds crazy but i still sometimes hear him..like in your poem..again nice job..
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wow.. Mzing..you have made me almost speechless.. great job.. good luck and my best wishes..
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Another poem with potential, but with tremendous potential.
It's an amazing write
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