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Dreams of tomorrow

I had a dream that we were dancing,
In silence, to the songs in our memories.
We flowed together in an empty field
as the sun was setting in the distance.
You held me close to you
Making up for the time we'd spent apart.
You held onto the dip in my back
And I brushed my fingers through your blonde hair
Staring into your blue eyes like I've wanted to for so long.
Your lips, your touch, your glance,
they're all the things I've longed for
Since what seems like forever ago.
Finally I have the chance to say what I've wanted
To tell you "I love you my blonde hair blue eyed angel.
Forever more, never apart."

Author notes

This is mainly about my special someone and how good it will feel to hold him again.


Sn: Queenciar
option: about finding true love and waiting for them to come [return in my case]

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  • emc2
    October 12, 2008

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    Awwww! I love this poem! You did a wonderful job. I love the details, and this is a poem I can relate to very, very well! Excellent job!


    • QueenCiar
      October 12, 2008
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      thanks :]
      I've got to mail that off to Mike here soon. ^_^
      woooo<3