Asphyxiated beneath a callous thumb
retching…
and begging…
as an expanding anguish roughly impales-
breeding internal mutilation
Pubescent breasts
rip and snag
on the iron nails of an anthropomorphic grin
exposing
a breathing vein
Listless portals
rupture in roughly hewed sockets
while gnashing teeth crush
brittle stubs of nerve endings -
splitting bone and sinew
The human body hemorrhages
in a floodgate of unrelenting pain –
disemboweling senses
as the small opening of conscious
is finally devoured
-cremated within earthly hellfire
Author notes
May udergo further revision
Lyric Prompt:
I can't feel my senses
I just feel the cold
All colors seem to fade away
I can't reach my soul
~Frozen by Within Temptation~
Image Credit: deviant art
A contest entry
- The Darkwrite Challenge Round II by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
800 points, ended October 25, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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lol Gross. I think I just threw up in my mouth. Nice butt poem.
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lol, lovely review
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I figured you'd appreciate that.
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ha, of course
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WOW!
I am left speechless by this entry.
Very vivd imagery and definately a great job finding inspiration from this prompt.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
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thank you... it was an interesting dark journey.
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