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Your Love

Your arms around me
Holding me tightly
Everything feels so right
Nothing about this is wrong
Your hands tangled in my hair
Your fingers linked in mine
You whisper softly in my ear
"I love you
Don't ever let me go"
I give you a small smile
While you slowly come closer
As your lips touch mine
At this moment
I know this is where I belong
Wrapped in your arms
With the sheets mangled between us
You're my new obsession
And I don't want that to change
Your head is nested upon my chest
My arms pull you close
I don't want to let go
I need to feel you
Please tell me you'll stay
Please tell me you're mine
And I'm yours
I don't want to wake from this dream
I want to make this a reality, baby
I need your love to live

Author notes

If you've read my peom, Not Meant To Be, this is about the same girl. No, we're not dating. But last night I told her how I feel. And she admitted that she felt the same way...She said she wanted me bad, but didn't know if I liked her. She said she didn't know if I liked girls, so she didn't say anything. She said if I would have said something sooner she would have taken me in a heartbeat...But she can't change anything now because she is with another girl who she loves a lot...This broke my heart, but at the same time it made me feet good inside knowing that she liked me too...and still does...So after we had that talk, I went to bed, and had this dream, and I wish it was a reality...

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  • Bohemianwriter
    February 4
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    THIS WRITE IS BEEAAUTFILLL


  • Samantha Marie
    February 1
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    wow I love this poem!!
    totally inspirational,
    I'm gonna write a poem now ^.^


  • juggalette cutie
    October 14, 2008

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    wow

    i love this hun its very touching to the heart and i love your page keep writing you do have tallent hun keep them comming *hugs*


    • Evanescence
      October 14, 2008
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      thank you =]
      i'm trying to write more, but i've not gotten any inspirations, or flashbacks, or nightmares or anything to trigger me to write. but halloween is coming up so i'll prolly write about that...

  • saretyuiop
    October 14, 2008

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    Love/ tradgity thing... sniffles. One day it'll work out. Give things time cause "time heals all wounds..." Watch and see my love.


  • Samantha Marie
    October 12, 2008
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    awh i'm crying for you love

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