Indecisive politeness
(blind spots)
(Polka-dots)
Leaving shots of splendor,.
Clouded indescretion
(Dotted eyes)
Trickling tears of alligators
Tickling children
(laughing cries)
She laughs, and doesnt say I love you.
she waits for me to say the right thing.
she'll leave me in the end.
I dont care.
I love her
Blissful declinings
(shotgun shots)
(Laughing stops)
She stares at my heart.
watches my eyes for thoughts.
(she dies)
whistling formations
fidgeting temptations.
(selfish lies)
Her eyes await a new beginning.
without me she's lost
she's gone
Im crying
I love you
Comments
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thank you both
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Wow. This is quite some poem that you have going on here. I really liked this. But the funny part is, that I don't know why. I guess because of the way it kind of jumps and goes back and forth. Plus you have this way of being so open and honest and I just really liked it. I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself.
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Excellent
'tis a fine write, indeed. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.
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