Oh fields of white with stars that must have fallin'
can I step out to dance, I hear them callin'
camomile wild apple smells on linen beddin'
gifted treasures softly smooths for silvery weddin'
Author notes
Prompt word was 'seatbelt' I went with an abstract 33 words ( read it properly this time lol) dear Gypsy 
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of brilliance #3 by AutumnGypsy.
600 points, ended October 14, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Brilliant!!!
Thank you for sharing!! Peace, Cyn 
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s thankyou dear Cyn s
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You're welcome,
This is a most deserving poem (should have won)!! Peace, Cyn
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This is so well done, nice abstract metaphor. Best to you in the contest
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s and so many thanks for your brilliant inspiration
Lib x x x
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All right! This is fantastic! You grabbed me with the first line thinking you misspelled “fallen” but then I realized it was intentional as I read on. The imagery is wonderful and your original use of poetic license is brilliant.
Love,
Amera♥
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Oh that is Brilliant!! thankyou so much Amera Much love Lib x x I am spellbound by your image dancing could watch for hours
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thankyou so much for your kind words s
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tastefully written; my friend.
Thank you again for the read this evening
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