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Box

Inside a box of blue I sit,
sit I in box of blue.
The memories chase,
I can't erase,
the nightmares caused by you.

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  • simply.nothing
    October 22, 2008

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    Great

    I loove limericks! This was a very very good one, too. You conveyed a huge array of emotions in 5 short lines. Bravo!


  • Fantessa
    October 12, 2008

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    yep imma shoot him with a 22, no wait a 12 gauge haha thatll mutilate him =D, loves ya alot, *big hugs*