Look up in the sky,
And see a bright star,
A star that is hope,
A star that is love,
A star that is mine.
This star slowly,
And exquisitly falls down to the Earth,
Much as how an angel slowly descends from Heaven above,
And lands gently in my hands,
This star shines so boldly,
But yet so softly,
Full of light,
Full of life,
Full of hope,
And love.
My falling star,
Falls to me,
And rests gently in my hands,
This star shows me everything I yearn to know,
Whom I will love,
What I will do,
And shows me I will be okay.
I keep this star,
This star that is ever so dear to me,
I keep it near my heart,
I keep it in my mind,
Cause this star is full of
Hope,
Love,
Life,
Light,
And it is mine,
And it's light shines for me,
For eternity.
Author notes
Option 3--Stars
Our Dance of Romance, and Bleeding Heart as well
A contest entry
- If I Caught a Star by Autumn Ginger.
300 points, ended October 14, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My Welcome Back by Amorous Arms.
750 points, ended December 15, 2008, 59 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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beautiful
another joy to read
it is really refreshing to read something like this when people tend to always write about pain -
Very nice work here
The light within each of us comes from the stars and the grace of god in the giving of a gift from heaven the child . This light is shared betwen parent and child for the duration on earth and for the rejoining in heaven we must keep the light shinning to guide us back home
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I really like this one!!
It's wonderful and I like the thought of capturing a star! I wrote about a star once.
Total fail haha. but oh well.
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Very nice.
I really love this poem. Its so meaningful. You did well! -
this is lovely, would it not be a nice way to be born with a star within ones hand...
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Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck!
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