He was the kind of person
you could always trust
very responsible
honest
hard working
accountable
dedicated
driven
everyone in town counted on him
trusted his every word
his parents never had to worry
he will always be missed
he was
...my son
Author notes
PROMPT - Quote:
"he was the only kid I knew that could stay out all night and not be missed..."
~by Claude Brown from the Novel, "Manchild in the Promiseland"~
50 words or less
A contest entry
- Sunday Afternoon Quickie by poetryality.
600 points, ended October 13, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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There are high emotions written here and as it seems great loss. I am sure “he is missed". I am also sure with a poem such as this as a tribute he is still with us in spirit. He is home! This is an excellent entry that struck my heart to its core. Thank You! I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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