falling, the rays skip silver
upon the skin of the pond,
as shadows run shivers
into the night, and stars
flicker red and blue embers,
colors within dreams
silence fleeces circles
around the moon, and sound
will awaken dawn, where
diamonds crisp life on leaves
held as rainbows of perfect color
within humbled mind,
allowing the heart to soar
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These are beautifully presented images of blessings as they touch and color our world. How easily they can be missed, and how precious when found.
Very nicely done. ~Pamela 
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Ah, Pam
nice to hear from you. You kept your word, and your visit a precious one. Thank you for your comment. Frans
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I loved the ripple effect ...
starting outside and going ever deeper into the very heart. Wonderful in its visuality! You are indeed fully aware of the beauty of your Port Elizabeth oceanic splendour!
Love
Myra
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Thank you
Myra, for your comment. You're quite correct, I was thinking of Port Elizabeth when writing this poem. Frans
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Blessings to you
reading the eloquent penned lines is a blessing to the ears. They feel my heart with peace my friend.
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rc3,
thank you for your visit. I appreciate your comments. Frans
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