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Missing

This is a short song
About what is missing
And it ought to turn out
Not too hard to find it is
You....

That is why I'm writing
To climb a mountain
For brooks that flow
Working in odd hours
For solutions
Lying in shadows

May all ills vanish!

Author notes

Inspiration for this song is from a short story that had to do with a crisis in Washington and our world. In that story, a part was missing. It is missing in this bit, too, by this author. Can you find it? (Hint: that story was by P. A. Kagan, but no fair googling it!)


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  • Mr Violet
    October 15, 2008

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    hmm, I like it. Maybe it's the influence of your inspiration, but the middle part seems more abstract than you generally are - and I like it! Good job.


    • Jornada
      October 16, 2008
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      Thank you! I seem to be having more abstract thoughts lately! Thanks for not posting the secret!