In my mind there are thoughts
I think these thoughts are well thought out
and I think they make sense.
But sometimes there are other thoughts.
They stir a different part of my mind,
more primitive, more base.
I let them ruminate, for minutes at best.
And though I'd never admit it to most,
I always laugh, and that's always the sign.
I walk to the truck, pull off the tool belt,
and grab a Marlboro red and a Dr. Pepper
Then I make for my odoriferous plastic throne.
As I close the door, Sharpie in hand
I always chuckle as I share my half-thought thoughts
with the subscribers to the job-site poly-john!
Author notes
Any chance I can get a do over?! 
A contest entry
- WORDS- come get all my points! by The-Human-Stain.
773 points, ended October 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Okay, how bad did I do?
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Have to...
I have to keep it. It's the word I was given, and I used it. No turning back now. Thanks for the offer, though. -
you can keep this word or get a new lol
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sure if you wish
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okay I'm sorry but I have to give you one I've been saving up......yours is.john
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