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Into the Jungle

The path seems clear,
But that is not what you should fear,
For in the jungle,
Even a small mistake can make you tumble.

Look to the tress and you will see the face,
Of a man who once entered this place.
Trapped forever, encased in his tomb.
He underestimated the forest, and now is stuck in it's womb.

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The face in the picture stood out the most for me. So I wrote about what I saw in that face...

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  • Starstruck
    October 14, 2008

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    hehe I like ^.^ I looked at the picture and saw a staircase to nothing, but I'm a little too late to write about that aren't I