Sometimes, you try too hard.
Just take things step by step,
and stop to smell the roses.
No one appreciates them anymore.
The price of time is rising,
but people are forgetting its worth.
It's nice to know you're trying,
but I liked how you were before.
Author notes
10.12.08
Vaughn.
Prompt:
baby --> baby steps.
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Comments
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Great piece. I can totally relaye to your powerful ending! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!
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very nice
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Awesome.
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baby
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