She is a wild flower in a dessert,
With broken dreams.
So fragile .
So innocent.
Yet broken.
Look at her misty eyes.
You can see her dark secrets.
She’s craving for love.
And Happiness.
She is waiting in vain.
For your sweet comeback.
Where are you?
Author notes
OPTION ONE- PICTURE PROMPT
A contest entry
- #23 OPTIONS CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
600 points, ended October 26, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thanks...she's a girl like me...hehehe... i hate loneliness...thanks for your comment mwah...
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You did a wonderful job writing for this contest. Your piece is so filled with emotion and your words paint a very vivid picture for the reader. Good luck...
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thanks for your comment..she is really so sad that's why...
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i don't really know why, but i liked how you simply described why she looked so sad and distant.
liked your little story (:
though i felt that 'sweet comeback' just sounded a little odd here, i loved the phrase ' wildflower in the dessert'. lovely
best of luck
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Fitting
This is a good emtional description to go witht he photo!
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