Beatin' beat, beats Luna Moon
orange glows blaze coloured rooms
racy, tunes spawned liquer on tap,
mucho cantando pored from every vein,
amigos gathered as the moon grew strong
Beatin' beat, beats soulful thrust.
Sustained, gyrating, wealed hips to bliss
crowds now throng, an all night test,
chillin', cool, backroom boys eyed
senoritas muy bonitas, latino queens
in braided beams slipped to slide,
plucked to trumpeting strains, melt
sweated, heated beads dripping moistened
bricks that bleed, gives way to day.
Crescent arched, pulsating
loads some more
hits the floor
in limboed sway
lost in the dance
Author notes
Loved the music that was the prompt for this 'Spanish Moon' .. not heard it before .. an abstract take... thankyou for setting up this comp .. music brilliant x x
A contest entry
- Spanish Moon by zochit2me.
2200 points, ended November 14, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Interesting piece here
Ah the spanish moon sounds are riveting and yet give the vision of heated love where one becomes lost within the dance
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OLE!! GOOD JOB ON THIS! Makes you want to dance just reading.THANKS!!!
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Haahaa Glad you enjoyed this loved the OLE !! Muy Bien amigo
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Oh my dear Wolfie that's fantastic and really made me smile, loved the idea of you 'bopping along'
s Lib keep on rockin'
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Wonderful abstract! So much motion and rhyme - almost calypso. I bopped along as I read and thoroughly enjoyed!!
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