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Haunted

Susuration
curls its way from the shadows
You feel it caress
your neck.
 
Turn around!
 
Nothing
is there.
 
Ice
carries itself invisibly
on your breath.
The cold presses
against your bones.
You can't shake it off.
 
The fog
waltzes in swirls
And makes faces
that leer in your
peripheral vision.
 
No doubt about it,
this place
is
Haunted.
 

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Something for Halloween. Oh, how I do love this holiday!

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  • hells fallen angel
    October 12, 2008
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    beautifully worded

    your words create a beautiful scene i love the holiday too also thanx for commenting on mine


  • Super-man
    October 12, 2008
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    Shizniz!!!

    You create a vivid image in the mind.