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Love Listened.

Walking on a desolate path
threading through wreckage around
whispering loves sweet song
calling for its wings

Whispers lost in the thrashing winds
never broken through, never heard
my heart falling fast
giving up hope

Then i see it there
a light shining in this lasting gloom
whispering so tenderly
My heart begins to soar

Because Love Listened.

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Title given to me by PureRomance .

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Yes the art of listening and truly hearing what others say and what you say to them I feel is almost a lost art for their is so much violence and divorce today humanity has lost their way


  • PureRomance
    October 12, 2008

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    I love it. I knew you would do a marvelous job with this. Keep up the excellent work. God bless you always in everything you do and write.