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"If Tears were gold, then I'm a millionaire!"

Here i am again...
Lonely.
Alone.
Helpless.

Life really sucks...
I always asked God, "why me?"
He left me unanswered.

Feels like am drowning in my own tears...
Anybody else there will try to fix a broken piece of me?
If tears were gold, then I'm a millionaire now. so Cheers!

Author notes

"I'm a munchkin's apple pie yada dida oh-so-in-love-with-life!!"

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  • ishelicious
    October 13, 2008
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    thank you for your comment char.....i appreciate it...


  • charmander13
    October 13, 2008
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    Love how you did a great comeback at the end! That ironic twist at the end puts a new spin to the whole poem! "If tears were gold, then I'm a millionaire now. so Cheers!" Yes, cheers!

    Love your positivism, dear

    Thanks for entering and all the best!