Oh God
be my constituent holding my hand
hinting me all the time
about the sublimity of this life
describing me the hypothesis to live with it
I know my ordinary life
does not make me a splendid person
yet you must realize
that I am constantly eager to get inspiration
from the fictions of your radiance
however , all such timeliness is feasible only
when you prefer to stay inside me
accepting me as your follower
making me to betoken your illumination
forming me a gifted soul
Oh God...
Author notes
“Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart”
A contest entry
- Beauty..........Quote or pic inspired Quickie by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 13, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful, and eloquent, my favorite part:
" all such timeliness is feasible only
when you prefer to stay inside me
accepting me as your follower
making me to betoken your illumination
forming me a gifted soul "
It is the light within that prevails, and you have told about it here, making your soul, even to shine brighter. I love you style, and the flow of your words, I love the soul you put into your work. Thank you
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the radiance within .... the imagery in this write shows how the radiance projects outs and the world shines. when one feels beauty, one sees beauty.
thanks.
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So beautiful is the light that comes from your heart!
Lovely poem
TY for entering!
Lynda
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You are clearly a veteran of the characteristics of the soul and the proper attitudes toward God. Beautiful picture too.
Paul
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"however , all such timeliness is feasible only
when you prefer to stay inside me
accepting me as your follower"
I loved these lines for they were so humble. I wish all people realize how great God is and how tiny we are. I know someone who doesn't think he shouldn't be satisfying God, that God should accept him... I don't know how some people think. Best of luck in the contest, this poem shines with so much faith and clean heart.
~Noor
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and your light shines so bright dear Prabhu .. wonderful write .. so uplifting ..
s Libx x
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