the stairway of sobriety
has too narrow a view
with each rung of society
condemnation peeks through
her determination wavers
stumbling with her needs
craving pleasure's favors
self-denial she feeds
and now she is fallen, extinguishing her flame
carried by humanity, without any blame
In a list
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Comments
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This was a very in depth write from the picture..the metaphors of each object used was phenomonal!!
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What a delight to read, a great take on the picture!!
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