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Gone

Breeze so warm swaying around
The sun so bright dying down
Stood alone with no one there
Soon i will find you this i swear.

Wrapping arms around myself so tight
My eyes squint in the dying light
Wishing you were here
To make things clear.

Your sweet kisses i miss
Nothing now to send me in a crazed bliss
You arms around me to help protect
Nothing more to reflect

Baby such an angel you were for me
Always there when i needed to be free
Cant you see just how much i love you
How without you i feel so blue?

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  • PureRomance
    October 12, 2008

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    AWWWWWWW

    This poem is absolutely heartfelt and touching. It's so sad and full of love. You did a magnificent job with this piece and I enjoyed reading it all. Keep up the excellent work.