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Upon this soil that I walk

Sitting upon this blessed

Soil

To rest my weary bones

I marvel at the lusious home

You have prepared for me

I look around, next to me

below my feet and wonder

At all the wild flowers

You preened this Earth with

I see art , delicasy

A Master mind behind it

And wonder in dismay

Who !

Who has the skill

To paint as such

With so detail, and vision

Who knows to knit

With such a flair

a carpet fit for Kings

And in my heart

Rejoyces

The thought of  You

 My Lady

I look up, to the sky

And see deep blue, that crowns me

With diadems, of precious stars

That flicker to my wish

Oh, lady 

The beauty of it all

Excells !

Beyond compare

Your beauty as Above

Below

Stands out

For all to see

And I marvel

Oh, Goddess.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Sandygram silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    So Beautiful

    I can se why you won Silver with this poem. Your words are lovely and the imagery quite stunning. This was a pleasure to read this early morning. Very uplifting. Take care.

    Blessings To You,
    Sandy


  • ea silver member
    November 9, 2008
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    a nice reverent piece; giving appreciation for the wonders of nature


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 14, 2008

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    You are appricating HIS art and using your own art to bring the emotions..and that is the beauty of this life..a wonderous work my friend..thanks for sharing it..welldone...


    • Luce
      October 14, 2008
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      I humbly thank you for your kind words
      and for honoring my write
      Blessings always, dear poet
      Nick


  • LilyRose
    October 12, 2008

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    Sweet is the blessed soil, deemed rotten by death
    Yet the beauty intricately laces,
    The crafted bloom held in hand, and awe by the eye
    Ah such angelic shadows are casted
    Beneath your poetic moon
    Winged bows rooted in sanctity
    How sacredly written, this poem
    ...your vision


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 12, 2008
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    O Lord what a lovely poem!
    I wish you luck in the contest

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