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Falling

Thunder crashing
Rain pounding
Clouds falling
Crushing me

A path worn down
Lost in time
Not knowing what step to take
I stumble, i fall

Heavens wings unfold
Wrapping around me tight
Lifting me so gently
Settling me down just right

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  • PureRomance
    October 12, 2008

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    Extremely Deep

    The imagery and wording in this piece is immaculate. You did another splendid job with this. I always look forward to reading yours. God bless and never lose sight of your brilliant gift.

    -Jöel-