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Dying World

World has crashed down
Broken into bits
Fires raging
No water to calm.

In the midst a solitary figure
Beating slowing
Yet hardly beating at all
Murmuring let this pain stop

At last water falls down
Cascading uncontrolled
Drowning out the burning fires
Letting a sad serenity envelop the world

Falling onto bended knee
crushed by the emotions threefold
slowly peace and slumber comes
and the world is no more.

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  • PureRomance
    October 12, 2008

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    Wow!

    This poem is deep and dark and another brilliant job from another incredible poet. Keep up the excellent work and God bless you always.