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Burned

Lost and confused
Chopped and broken
Thrown openly
Into the burning fires

Screams and wails
Fall on deaf ears
As the pain comes unbearable
Yet no one to help

Left alone to char
Blackened by the pain
Lost in a sea of eternal confusion
No love no more

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  • jyzzie
    June 5

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    This is really pretty... how did you come up with it... I love the pink contrast with the black backround and the full moon its really pretty.


    • FallenEngel
      June 5
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      This was written with the inspiration to how I felt when my 8 year relationship went down the drain. . It was how I felt at that moment in time.

      Thank you .


  • PureRomance
    October 12, 2008

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    This poem is really good. You did a fantastic job with this. It's a little dark, but I still enjoy reading your poems so much. I'll always be a friend for you and there for you. I hope that I never make you feel like this. God bless you always.

    Jöel