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My Friend


To the far, far reaches
of the Galaxy,
the lowest depths
of the deepest sea ,
like a beacon shining
always there for me.
Praising, encouraging
the artist in me,
imbuing me with attributes
I never could see.
Beyond space
and spiraling time
grasping what others let go,
never allowing me to 
succumb to the undertow.
Like a lighthouse
warning of the perilous shore;
stalwart, steadfast
so much more,
lending me wings
when mine fail
always the wind
behind my sail…
            you are My Friend.






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prompt honoring friendship

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  • Still Standing gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Congrats on the GOLD!!!! This is truly a gold wothy poem and it speaks about the true meaning of friendship and wh at it is all about. I have people who say, are you writing another D*mn poem, and others who say I can't wait for you to write something else or print it out so I can take it on my trip with me...those are true friends...even the one that talks about the D*mn poem cuz they inspire me to keep writing!!!!!


  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 28, 2008

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    Simply beautiful! I absolutely love this one! It is evident this comes surging up from the great depths of the heart.
    I love the simplicity of the flow. Well penned! Thanks for entering. keep the ink flowing and good luck~
    ~Donna~

  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 28, 2008
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    Simply beautiful! I absolutely love this one! It is evident this comes surging up from the great depths of the heart.
    I love the simplicity of the flow. Well penned! Thanks for entering. keep the ink flowing and good luck~
    ~Donna~