halloween night
its so bright
so it might give you the frights
it might scare you
itso dont step on goo
so you might wanna get a crew
to save you
A contest entry
- Halloween Contest by galfalfa.
525 points, ended October 14, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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trick or treats!!!
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In line five, you should change 'isto' to 'so'. Other than that it's good, with your seemingly trademark simplicity. :
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LOL
I love this its simple and simply funny. This is really good.
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LOL, yes ...one must watch out for that goo on Halloween - its a bugger to get off your shoe, worse then gum,
thanks for this,
galfalfa -
lol!
amazing.
much love,
oldschool
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cool
You forgot to place a space in between it and so, just to let you know. And I like the poem.
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Ha ha ha. this was a fun and cute write. Halloweeen night isnt very far away, and so many people have wonderful parties and celebrations then.
I bet you will too. This was fun to read.
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