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you.

It's the way you look at me,
I could drown in your eyes,
You took my heart whole
and it seems you're keeping it safe,
From the elements, that aren't always forgiving.

You saved me,
From myself,
From everything bad,
but now,
Now I only think of you, and how it'll be,
When I hold you.
In my arms.
Forever.

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