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Faltering Aurora

The earth is soaked with blood cells
Once circulating with living purpose

The trees blackened with ashen aspects
Scorched by human conflagration

The water thickens with vile taints
Its spawn flopping in ghastly spasms

And the sky…

Stained with dying perspirations
Weaves its unnaturally coloured shroud

Author notes

This is the image that came in my mind from looking at this picture. I hope you enjoy it

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Wow. How.. beautiful... and strong, a powerful hit.



  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Oh just nice.

    I didn't see the picture but i did get one in my head when i read it.
    Great write.
    -Mandi


  • feetus
    October 14, 2008

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    I did enjoy it
    Earth, Trees, Water, Sky....
    Elaborating a little on each.
    Excellent take on the prompt!
    Thanks for entering and g'luck