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Lolipops

Such a delicate sweetness
On a tongue seeking remorse
Such a pretty little flavour
Smooth a moment of discourse

Oh, lick it once
Suck it twice
Bite to get into the stick
Might be a tootsie center inside
Might be bubble gum instead

Strawberries, green apples
A sugary, sweet shell
Taste it sweet
Its a treat
A delicious lolipop

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I have way too many ideas I need to toss around...

Please, if you see any innuendos, keep them to yourself. I'm *trying* to write innocently.

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